Pitter Patter

This has nothing to do with the idea Feick came up with. So read and tell me what you think:

I hear the rain piter pattering on the window,
Pitter Patter
I look to the window as the pitter pattering gets louder,
PIttter PAtter
It seems to put a clam feeling though my body,
PITter PATter
It grows louder as if it was someone beating on a drum,
PITTer PATTer
The clam is washed away as the strom grows,
PITTEr PATTEr
I hear the boom of the thunder and see the flash of the lighting,
PITTER PATTER
And now the strom is dieing like all must do one day,
pitter patter,
pitter patter,,
pitter patter.... until another day.

I wrote this not to long ago and would love to know what you guys and girls think of it.